The globalization is an interdependent planet. Many relationships are not limited to territorial boundaries. A country is affected by activities of other countries.
The process of globalization is an unprecedented （前所未有）interdependent planet where economical, social, religion, political, cultural and military relationships are not limited to territorial boundaries and no countries or states or entities are not affected by outside its direct control. （39 words）
First and foremost, Hong Kong is a renowned city. The scenery of Victoria Harbour is mesmerizing and stunning. Countless of skyscrapers and tall towers were built along the harbor front.
First and foremost, Hong Kong is a renowned city for its mesmerizing Victoria Harbour and stunning scenery embellished (裝飾) 【運用形容語技術】by countless skyscrapers and tall towers built(建成) 【運用形容語技術】along the harbor front.
Language 6-7, Organization 7，這些段落好難不拿level 5或以上的。
再舉多個例子吧！(例三)
You could possibly send me some brochures. Be sure that they contain the information on membership and associated fee. If the brochures are not available, please provide me the contact details of any such clubs. So, I can make my own enquiries.
If so, you could possibly send me some brochures containing the information on membership and associated fee, or at least provide me the contact details of any such clubs so that I can make my own independent enquiries. (38 words)
又是一句Language6-7; organization 7的句子。
怎樣提高自己作文的「模仿能力」? 關鍵不是死記，而是懂將一些高分句了拆分成3個家族(主句+形容語+修飾語) ，當中主句又要懂怎樣寫出長意念及短意念。英文說穿了，100%英文都只是就是這3個家族的混合而已，中學到大學其實就是不停學這幾個家族！在我們的英語課程E，你可以學到在高考英文常用的高頻生字，而且透徹明白怎樣從一句 “I am a boy” 精通寫到優質複合句，不再是靠感覺背了一堆DSE 英文寫作範文只知其然，而是以後的寫作知其所以然。並且有能力在長篇的DSE Reading 高速找出主句來看。
DSE Writing考試局給的要求是3部份評分:
